Red Sky Session 4
title: “Red Sky Session 4”
layout: note
date: 28-08-2022
last_modified_at: 2023-12-08 12:09
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- Remove impurities
- Poems are machines.
- Put good stuff in: Read-Widely and talk with new people
Gut is the Best Editor
- Need to train and trust. Other people are valuable, but hone your own voice
- Constant process Try and experiment, learn and grow.
- Read scientifically, analytical. How are they doing it?
Lydia Davies Treatment
Lydia-Davies - Never includes, I think I feel I love I hate Communicates through action only
Try Different Washes or Styles of Writers
Editing as a Creative Process. An Experiment (Editing-is-writing)
Poetic-Form As an Editing Tool
- What is there already?
- Play within structure.
Combine Poems into a collection/ Pamphlet.
Order in different ways.
No Gospel. Question Everything.
Look for Specific-Detail.
Get Rid of Redundancies
Identify Clichés
We All Have Factory Presets in Poems
- How can you break out?
- Should you?
Making Space.
Show-Dont-Tell. Where do you want to be explicit?
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Red Sky Sessions
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